Friday, August 24, 2018

Whale migration...


I am proud of this piece of work because I did a lot of research about it. It took me a while to read all the websites and sort it into my work.  I know a lot more about the humpback whale now and I could tell you about their migration progress. I think its pretty cool that they have their goals in life and they live to complete their migration. They are very loyal and determined and beautiful.  I really like this piece of writing and to publish it I kept it quite simple.
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  1. AnonymousSeptember 20, 2018 at 11:25 AM

    Hi Ella
    It is leah from makaraka school and I love that you care about the environment and all of the sea life you will be a great help to this world.

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